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I want to take these next two pages for pacing the narrative, development and perspective. Artwise I had to branch outward a little. I noticed that I don’t show enough of the characters, and originally that was because I was more interested in getting the story done. I’m not blind, I realize I’ve gotten a bit better since I started this, so I’ll start putting more effort into it. You guys deserve it!

Thanks to the talented artist for coloring my original line! Be sure to Watch her, she’s has an amazing gallery. I look forward to our continued collaboration.